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Prolouge = Hanako

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                 Prologue == Hanako's Birth == The Incident


Darkness shrouds the view, only the whispers of voices could be heard, very faint and steadily rising. When the voices hit their climax, they were very clear, but still, in darkness.

"Doctor is she okay, can I see her now?” a worried man asks.

“Yes, but try not to wake your wife, she’s done a lot so far.", another man says in reply to the other.

All is clouded of the mans face except his the bright yellowish-tan hairs on his chin. We also see that the place is a hospital, it is bright. The man’s expression to the words, of the doctor, as we can see now, was of happiness, and of relief.

"Also, your wife wanted to name her Hanako,” says the doctor, checking his clipboard, and looking up at the man.

“Hanako huh, she sure knows how to pick names. I like it, h-a-n-a-k-o.”, the man says as he walks into a room.

We now see him thank the doctor, and as the doctor walks away, we see the man open the door in front of him titled “Room 117” . There is a woman in a hospital bed, and on the women, there is a lively young baby,Hanako. The Heart Monitor beeps steadily, assuring him that his wife is healthy and that nothing is wrong. He slowly puts his hand on her head and softly and yet gently, moves his hand over hers and grasps it tightly, yet not too tight. As he slides his hand over hers, and he rubs his hand over her ring.

“Congratulations, Monika. You’ve gave birth to the most beautiful child ever”, he whispered to her.

Hanako just laid there, quietly looking at the man, as he gently rubbed her face. The man smiles and tears up. He wipes away them, but they are tears of happiness, so he’s not ashamed.
Hanako then looking at him oddly and noticing this man was a bit confused not knows what to expect. She then burps and relieved the man goes back to rubbing Hanako softly on the forehead and holding his wife’s hand, but then something unexpected happens. Hanako’s eyes then turn an outlined purple glow. Her body starts to form an outer ring of purple and pink and shocked the man sharply gets away and is frightened not knowing how to respond. He tries to move forward, but cant. It is almost as if they were an impenetrable wall in front of him, not allowing him to go any further. Therefore, as his first response, the man tries to outwit this barrier by using force. The man runs back and tries to run at this barrier. As he smashes into it, he notices that he did not budge it one bit. Suddenly, Hanako’s eyes get brighter, and her hair starts to stand up, almost as if there were tiny strings holding them up, and waving on them. The man then feels a gut wrenching pain, in which he cannot understand, the man then with incredible strength, is knocked back into the wall next to the door. The wall is not dented; the man is bleeding, and hurt, but not likely to die. The man looking up to see that the Heart Monitor is moving faster, meaning his wife’s heartbeat was raising somehow. He slowly stood up, feeling where his ribs were, he seems to have cracked a few, maybe broken one. In pain, he stares at his child, not knowing what to say, or even, what to do. After he stands all the way up, he can see that Hanako now looking normal. She does not have the glow to her anymore and the barrier is not there either, as he puts his hand out. The man is too scared to get any further to his child, or his wife, whose heart rate is now normal. Hanako then starts crying, and footsteps down the hallway can be heard, because the impact from the man on the wall was quite loud for someone not to hear. The man then looking at his wife, who looking like she’s about to wake up, as her eye lids slowly open. The door the rapidly opens, and two doctors comes in, looking around to see the baby crying, the wife awake, and the man by the door.

"What was that noise?” the older doctor asks.

The man hesitantly points at the child of his and very shakily runs out. Looking at his wife on the way out and his child, which had just been born, he keeps running with slowly running tears from his eyes.

“Wait, Sir, what happened here?” yelled the doctors as they are running after him.

"Sky?” the woman says as she slowly opens her eyes, but then falls back asleep.
**** Still working on my use of literate,as I'm very amateur and have only been writing for less than a year.So yeah,and thanks to any supportive comments :)
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